Thursday 12 July 2012

We & Super Junior (Third Part)


Story’s Profile
Story’s title              : We & Super Junior
Story’s sub title       : Super Junior Asli Indonesia
Story’s part             : 3
Story’s language   : Indonesian from Indonesian
Writer’s Profile
Writer’s name        : Indah Sunny Pertiwi Larasati
Writer’s gender      : Female
Writer’s birthdate   : December, 15th 1988 (Age 24)
Writer’s  story          : We & Super Junior
Story Begin
We & Super Junior
Writer: Indah Sunny Pertiwi Larasati  ~C’Indah~
Editor: Acha Kaori ~VanilaBlast~
Tiba-tiba datang anggota SuJu yang lain. Memanggil-manggil biasmu.
“Apa?” tanya biasmu kepada members Suju yang lain.
“Tuh, dia!”
“[menyebut nama biasmu], kita harus menuju Incheon! Ayo!” kata seorang member.
“Iya, sebentar!”
“Eh, ngomong-ngomong siapa kamu?” tanya member tadi ke kamu.
“Eh? Aku [sebutin nama kamu]. Fans-nya Kak [sebutin nama bias-mu].”
“Oh, ya udah. Ayo [sebutin nama biasmu] cepetan!”
“Iya, sebentar, tong! Udah, ya, [sebutin namamu]! Besok kita ketemu lagi di sini jam 3 sore. Oh ya, nomor hp kamu brapa? Nanti aku telpon.”
“[sebutin nomor hp kamu].”
“Oh, ya udah. Bye, [sebutin nama kamu]!”
“Bye!”
Mereka pun pergi. Kamu pun pulang ke rumahmu. Karena kamu sangat capek, kamu hanya memikirkan ingin tidur.
Tapi ternyata...

[Akan dilanjutkan ke part 4]

From Writer
안녕하세요, 여러분! 당신이 나에게 충실하는 것이 매우 기쁘다. 내가 당신을 잘못한 경우 사과! 하지만 매우 감사당신은 영혼을 제기했기 때문에감사합니다!!! ^_^ (Sorry yang ga ngerti :p )
~C’Indah~
Just a Little Moment
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We & Super Junior (Second Part)


Story’s Profile
Story’s title              : We & Super Junior
Story’s sub title       : Super Junior Asli Indonesia
Story’s part             : 2
Story’s language   : Indonesian from Indonesian
Writer’s Profile
Writer’s name        : Indah Sunny Pertiwi Larasati
Writer’s gender      : Female
Writer’s birthdate   : December, 15th 1988 (Age 24)
Writer’s  story          : We & Super Junior
Story Begin
We & Super Junior
Writer: Indah Sunny Pertiwi Larasati  ~C’Indah~
Editor: Acha Kaori ~VanilaBlast~
Ternyata, dia adalah cewek yang merupakan pacar dari biasmu.
“Hai, sayang! Lagi ngapain di sini?” tanya pacar biasmu.
“Eh? Oh...kamu.”
“Lho, kok, kamu jadi gitu, sih?”
Lalu, pacar biasmu nengok ke kamu dan ngedorong pundakmu.
“Heh? Siapa kamu? Jangan bilang kamu itu pacarnya pacarku!”
Lalu, biasmu ngebelain kamu dan akhirnya mereka berantem.
“Hei, Yuna! Jangan ganggu dia!”
“Terus, dia siapa? Dia itu pacar baru kamu, ya?”
“Bukan, Yuna! Dia itu fans-ku. Bukan pacar baruku. Ngerti?”
“Kalau cuma fans, kenapa kamu jalan-jalan berdua?”
“Emang idola nggak boleh, ya jalan-jalan berdua sama fans-nya? Buktinya aja, kamu itu bukan artis dan dulu hanya sekedar fans aku, kan? Tapi kita jadi pacaran, kan?”
Yuna hanya terdiam dan pergi meninggalkan kalian berdua.
“Maaf soal yang tadi, ya! Dia memang orang yang sering cemburu.”
“Iya, nggak apa-apa. Tapi, hubungan kakak sama Kak Yuna, gimana?”
“Oh, itu...Nanti aku coba pikir lagi.”
Tiba-tiba...
[Akan dilanjutkan di part 3]

From Writer
Hello, guys! Thanks because you already read my first story! Not first maybe, this is the second part of my first story. But thanks ^_^
~C’Indah~

Just a Little Moment
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We & Super Junior


Story’s Profile
Story’s title              : We & Super Junior
Story’s sub title       : Super Junior Asli Indonesia
Story’s part             : 1
Story’s language   : Indonesian from Indonesian
Writer’s Profile
Writer’s name        : Indah Sunny Pertiwi Larasati
Writer’s gender      : Female
Writer’s birthdate   : December, 15th 1988 (Age 24)
Writer’s  story          : We & Super Junior
Story Begin
We & Super Junior
Writer: Indah Sunny Pertiwi Larasati  ~C’Indah~
Editor: Acha Kaori ~VanilaBlast~
Hai, guys! Pasti udah tau, donk dengan boy band legendaris, internasional, and personil-personilnya yang ganteng-ganteng, SUPER JUNIOR? Yup! Hampir semua orang di benua asia dan benua eropa sudah mengenal grup band yang satu ini. By the way, kamu itu seorang ELF, nggak? Oke, kalo ngerasa kamu seorang ELF, wajib baca cerita yang udah i buat. Oke, keep your eyes healthy  and don't forget give my story +1 too, ya, guys! Oh ya, dalam cerita ini, kamu harus ngebayangin sambil baca cerita ini. Trus, maksutnya BIAS itu, personil favorite kamu di SuJu. Satu lagi, cerita ini khusus buat cewek yang blom punya pacar (kalo yg udah baca boleh" aja baca tapi hati" dimarahin pacar, ya! :p ) . Trus, ceritanya kamu manggil biasmu itu KAKAK padahal ceritanya umur kamu sama biasmu sama.Yang terakhir, dalam cerita ini, akan keluar banyak artis Korea lain selain SuJu,ceritanya mereka dan SuJu bisa dan ngerti Bahasa Indonesia. Udah jelas instruksinya, kan? So, cekidot!   ~C'Indah~

Pada suatu hari, kamu ketemu seorang cowok ganteenggg banget apalagi kamu itu ngenal dan nge-fans banget sama dia. Kamu tau nggak dia siapa? Dia itu bias kamu di SuJu! Kamu sampe nggak percaya banget bisa ketemu biasmu.
"Ka...kakak...kakak itu personil SuJu, kan?" tanya kamu malu-malu.
"Ye! (Ya!) Memangnya kenapa?" tanya biasmu sedikit angkuh.
"Nggak cuma nanya," jawab kamu.
"Oh, nama kamu siapa?" tanya biasmu lagi.
"Namaku [Sebutin nama kamu]," jawab kamu lagi.
"Oh, mmm.... kamu mau jalan-jalan sama aku nggak?"
"HAH? Oh, maksud aku iya. Gwaenchanh-ayo, oppa (baiklah, kak)!"
Lalu, kamu dan biasmu jalan-jalan di taman. Pertama, kamu ngeliat air mancur taman. Kedua, kamu makan-makan di cafe. Terakhir, kamu duduk-duduk di taman.
"Oh ya, oppa, oppa udah punya pacar blom?" tanya kamu.
Biasmu sedikit malu. Tapi dia jawab jujur.
"Udah," jawab biasmu.
Kamu terkejut dan sedih karna sebenernya kamu itu suka sama biasmu.
"Oh...Aku cuma nanya doang."
"Tapi jangan kaget, ya! Sebenernya, walaupun kita baru ketemu, aku pengen milih kamu, tapi aku terlanjur milih dia."
Perasaan kamu jadi sedikit seneng.
"Oh,begitu."
Saat kamu sama biasmu ngobrol-ngobrol, ada seseorang nyamperin biasmu.
Ternyata...

[Akan dilanjutkan di Part 2]

From Writer
Hello, guys! Thanks because you already read my first story! I hope you like it and I am very happy if you send me a preview.
~C’Indah~
Just a Little Moment
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Sister versus Sister


Story’s Profile
Story’s title              : Sister versus Sister
Story’s sub title       : Sisters’ Love
Story’s part             : 1
Story’s language   : English from English
Writer’s Profile
Writer’s name        : Nicole Yuri
Writer’s gender      : Female
Writer’s birthdate   : July, 4th 1989 (Age 23)
Writer’s story           :  Sister versus Sister
Story Begin
Sister versus Sister
Writer: Nicole Yuri ~NicoleYuristable~
Editor: Choi Yuna ~Yunaddicts~
~Part 1~
There is a big house with a full of loves. There are 2 twin sisters named Angel and Yuri with their chefs, drivers, maids, and secure guards. Unfortunately, they are orphans. Their parents have died since 3 years ago because of a plane crash.
One day...
“Angel, where’s my uniform. Did you see it?” asked Angel.
“Yes, I see it under that table,” answered Yuri.
“Oh, thanks! Why is it can be here?”
“Maybe wind doing that.”
“Maybe...”
After breakfast, they are going to their school by their car.
“Good morning, young ladies! Are you ready for your school today?” asked Mr. Brown, their driver.
“Yes and of course! I can’t wait it! Today is Minoru-Chan’s birthday! Yippi!” answered Angel with a lot of energy.
“Hey, I don’t know who Minoru is. Who is he? Is he your new BOYFRIEND?” asked Yuri.
“NO! NO! And NO! He is the most popular student in our school since Tomio-Chan out from our school. Are you don’t know him yet?”
“No. I think the most popular student is Yuki-Chan forever.”
“Yeah, whatever you think.”
“Uh...By the way, young ladies, if I may know, can we go now?” asked Mr. Brown suddenly.
“Please, Mr. Brown!” answered Yuri.
After they’re arriving in their school, Mr. Brown going back to their home with their car too. Yuri and Angel going to their class.
On the way to classroom, they meet Yamanaka Minoru, the most popular student in their school.
“Hi, Mino-Chan! Are you going to your class?” asked Angel with cutesy made-up.
“Oh, hi too, Angel-Chan! Honestly, I am going to the library now,” answered Minoru.
Yuri is very boring and so she leaving Angel and go to her classroom. Angel was surprised seeing her twin sister. But, she is doesn’t care because the only she want is to be the girl who closest to Minoru.
Then, Angel following Minoru to the library. Yuri has arrived to her classroom. Yuri is seeing Yuki Iwasaki, her classmate with a girl named Karin, her most bad classmate.
I must be the girl who closest to Yuki-Chan! That is I want! Yes!
So, Yuri is walking to Yuki.
“And so, we must have a surprise to him. Are you having an idea?” asked Yuki to Karin.
“Oh, I will think it, Yu-Chan! Bye!” answered Karin and goes leaving Yuki.
“Bye, Karin-Chan!”
“Hi, Yuki-Chan!!!”
“Oh, hi too, Yuri-Chan! Long time no see! How are you?”
“Maybe fine and maybe not. Since you’re gone to Perth I am very lonely. How are you too, Yuki-Chan?” asked Yuri with sadly made-up.
“Oh, I am sorry, Yuri-Chan! I am fine. To be honest...I am very lonely too because I don’t meet you least than 3 days, Yuri-Chan. So, I am very happy because you’re waiting me, Yuri-Chan! Thank you very much!” answered Yuki with ‘high-quality’ smiling.
Yuri very happy because she have got Yuki’s smile. And she is blushing. Yuki is seeing that.
“Oh, you’re welcome, Yuki. So, should are we entering our class?”
“Yes, my princess!”
They are going to their classroom. Let’s back to Angel! On the library...
“What book you will borrow, Mino-Chan? I will help you find it.”
“Oh, thanks! I am searching encyclopedic about animals now. Will you search it for me, Angel-Chan?”
“O...Of course, Mino-Chan!”
So, Angel and Minoru is searching the encyclopedic that Minoru’s search.
“BINGO, Mino-Chan! I found it!”
“Oh, thanks, Angel! Let’s go to the cashier and let’s go back to classroom!”
Finally, Angel and Minoru are going to their classroom.
“Bye, Angel-Chan!” said Minoru going to his classroom.
“Bye, Mino-Chan!” said Angel going to her classroom too.
At lunch time, Angel is sits near Minoru in table number 19. Yuri is sits near Yuki in table 22. Now, they are hostility only because LOVE.
“Oh yes, Yuri-Chan, if I may know, why are you don’t sit near A-Chan?” asked Yuki.
“This is because her faults to me, so I NEVER forgive her.”
“Ehm...Are you sure NEVER? How if you be forgive her again? Oh, I’m sorry! I don’t intend to interfere affairs of yours, I am only give suggest.”
“Hmm...I think you’re right. But, I think too I will NEVER forgive her.”
“Okay.”
Let’s back to Angel and Minoru!
“Angel-Chan, Yuri is your twin sister, right? Why are you don’t sit near her?”
“No! No! And no! That’s right, she’s my twin sister. But our relationship has been end.”
“Ehm...Why?”
“Never mind! You don’t need to know it.”
“Okay.”
[To be continued to part 2]

From Writer
Kon’nichiwa, all! Thank you so much to read my first story published on StoryCreator! Hope you like it and enjoy!
~NicoleYuristable~

Just a Little Moment
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Nyan Nyan's Story


Story’s Profile
Storys title              : Nyan Nyans Story
Storys sub title       : かわいい、スマート、幸運の猫
Storys part             : 1
Storys language     : English from English
Writer’s Profile
Writers name         : 赤いバラ
Writers gender       : Female
Writers birthdate    : June, 7th 1988 (Age 24)
Writers story          :  Nyan Nyans Story
Story Begin
Nyan Nyan’s Story
Writer: Akai Bara ~RoxieBara~
Editor: Choi Yuna ~Yunaddicts~
Hi, friends! My names Pinku Sakura but my friends always call me Nyan Nyan. I am a cat who living at Akibahara, Japan with a girl named Nana and with her family too. Nana once told to me that I am the only her best friend. However, my story started when Nana and her family moved to Tokyo, Japan. Nana didnt see I was still asleep in the living room. So, she and her family directly leaving me.
I have shouted, but Nana doesnt hear it. So, I am alone in the house. But, suddenly, my house was destroyed by shredder. Now, I can go to everywhere I want. Not every, I just follow the path of my live. Fortunately, on my journey which either want to go anywhere, I get a lot of attention from the pedestrians. So, Im not hungry or thristy.
However,  when I got in front of a store called Doggy-Boggy, there are 5 big dogs that confronting me. Apparently, they want my food that was given by pedestrians. Hey, stupid cat! Give us your food! If you dont do that, we will eat you, force one of them. Hey, why are not you search with your eyes by yourself? You have eyes, right? Why are you still wanted my food? This is my food! Not yours! answer me. Heh? What are you saying? Are you really serious? Hahaha, laugh one of them again. Okay, so, you are dont want give your food to us? Okay! As the promise, we will going to eat you! said one of them.
TO BE CONTINUED

From Writer
Hi! Thanks for reading this story. If you like my story, then let me call you as Barabeque (fans of me :p) Im sorry my English language is bad. Especially, for my Japan language, though I was born in Japan. Its because since I gone to South Korea now I am not good for Japan and English language. I am very sorry and I am very thank you very much to you ^_^
~RoxieBara~

Just a Little Moment
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